Ok spooks...i found this while digging through my disks while bored. here is this dumb poem thing i wrote about my first Manson show. Grim Jack's "Twas the Night of Marilyn Manson" inspired me...i remember now. So read if you're bored. In a way, it is a show review cause it has to do with the show =)

It was the night of Marilyn Manson, my very first show-
@ The Phantasy Nite Club, with the stage very low.
A nearby door, let in cold February air-
as the roadies set up their stage props with care.
They brought out a mannequin, with a large strap-on dildo-
and a black cube that gave off an eerie slime-glow.
A roadie came on, to tell us kiddies about the 'line'-
All VIRGINS to the left, it's feeding time!
i was standing far left, i was Number 1-
i thought of the torture, and all of the Fun!
Revelation 9 started to play softly, ignored by the crowd-
then the lights went out, and it got really loud.
i looked through the smoke, to see who was there-
i saw Daisy on stage, with aqua-green hair.
Then Sara came on, met his drums at the back-
Next was Madonna, wearing red rubber and black.
Twiggy was last, decked out in a dress-
his eyebrows drawn on, by far he looked best!
They put on their instruments, and were ready to play-
we waited for daddy.[which took all damn day!]
Then i looked to the left, to the backstage door-
i was leaning onstage, my knees hard on the floor.
Then i saw The Rev., as pretty as pretty can be-
He was in a black coat and some nice PVC's.
As he walked onstage, i grabbed his leg-
He flashed me a look like he wanted me to beg.
They blasted into "ORGAN GRINDER", the pit went real crazy-
The smoke all around made my vision real hazy.
The crowd-surfers onstage, made Manson quite pissed-
When they hit him he aimed with his mic stand, but missed.
It hit hard on a speaker, right next to my arm-
i saw daddy grin at me, like he meant me 'GOOD HARM'.
They continued with "CYCLOPS", the bass very loud-
Twiggy's bass hit me as he spit on the crowd.
The Reverend went wild, and crazy onstage-
He screamed out 'DIALATE', and let out his rage.
"GET YOUR GUNN" was up next, song number 3-
i was still on the stage, all my weight on my knee.
The ground speakers were moving from the force of the pit-
Their manager Frankie was having a fit!
He grabbed me while Manson sang his 'GODDAMN's-
He threw me offstage with the force of his hands.
"DOPE HAT" began now, i couldn't see them from there-
It would take the whole song and the pulling of hair.
But i fought my way back, to my up-front spot-
i enjoyed Manson's spit even though it was hot.
The sounds died down, and the crowd's screams were loud-
some faint noises began to sweep over the crowd.
Twiggy and Sara played their parts first-
Then Daisy joined them with a very loud burst!
It was "WRAPPED IN PLASTIC", the fourth of the night-
daddy peered at the crowd, his eyes filled with fright.
The next on their list was "WHITE KNUCKLES", to me a new name-
'RED SMEARS ACROSS HER FUCKING FACE', Manson yelled out in pain.
After it stopped and the pit had died down-
The room was all quiet, there wasn't a sound.
From the first note, it came back to me-
The Eurythmics song about the 7 seas.
"SWEET DREAMS" are surely made of these-
If daddy would strip, how could i disagree?
It was a great remake, of a really great song-
It sounded more creepy, and seemed a bit long.
The whole crowd knew that the song hadn't sucked-
We cheered when he said "NEXT ONE UP HERE'S GETTIN' BEATEN OR FUCKED".
The screaming of the fans lasted a while-
Then "SNAKE EYES" began and Twiggy cracked a smile.
"DOGMA" was next, i watched PoGo with wonder-
He stared at the ceiling with a great look of ponder.?
Then Manson got a guitar, the room was very dark-
They proceeded to play Numan's "DOWN IN THE PARK".
After it stopped, when it was over and done-
The voice manipulator came on and i thought "WHAT FUN!!"
The song was "MY MONKEY", they came on in full attack-
daddy twisted and turned and then bent his back.
They came to the breakdown, when Manson starts to talk-
He dropped his pants as i continued to gawk.
He stood on the cube, his dick out of sight-
The perfect MANPUSSY, oh what a night!
He kept it hidden and continued to tease-
When he showed it to us i was very pleased!
He crawled over to Twiggy, and lifted up his green dress-
Pulled down his tights, i was quite impressed!
He pulled out his dick, and proved Twig was a 'HE'-
i saw guys get sick who thought 'HE' was a 'SHE'.
The Rev. whipped out some lipstick and spread it all over his mouth-
"THIS IS FOR ALL YOU QUEER BOYS" he said to the crowd.
As "LUNCHBOX" began i was still a bit dazed-
He lit up his lunchbox, and ran 'round it crazed!
He walked from the right, over to my side-
i reached for his dick, oh how i tried!
i came very close, but i kinda missed-
a little to close because Manson got PISSED!
He grabbed my hand which was on his belly-
His other gripped my head turning my brain into jelly.
He pulled me in close, i expected a hit-
We were eye-to-eye and then he just SPIT!!
i loved it so much, i almost shit-
i licked it up good![my friend had a fit!]
After a while, not very long-
They came back out to do a few more songs.
First came the band, and they got set up-
daddy soon followed in his shiny G cup.
i heard Sara pounding as hard as he could-
Twiggy joined in, his dreads violently shook.
"CAKE AND SODOMY", one of their best-
He called to white trash, fags, and the rest.
During the song it continued to 'SPIT-RAIN-
When "MISERY MACHINE" came on i was completely drained.
'BEEP BEEP' went his horn, down highway 666-
daddy glared at us, his thoughts probably sick.
When "MISERY MACHINE" stopped and the stage was all clear-
The crowd got real rowdy and we all began to cheer.
We chanted our song, Manson had taught us that night-
"WE HATE LOVE, WE LOVE HATE" we yelled, our eyes full of fright.
But this did not bring them back, our trip was now done-
i wanted more as the lights came back on.
i left the club fulfilled and very content-
How i couldn't wait for my next Hell Descent!

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